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I enter the room
It's dimly lit and heavy with moisture.
It's hot
There is a fan sitting on the floor pointing into the room
It's not doing much good
You can hear the rain pouring outside of the open windows
The smell of green peppers is overpowering the scent of the rain
The night is young in Florida
I wonder how I came to be here of all places
sitting side by side with strangers
and people that I hardly know
How could I still feel so safe and comfortable?
And yet I know that no harm will come to me
The mountain man, young and strong, is sitting in the corner
the saggy beanbag chair he's resting in makes him look short
I know him. He likes to laugh
Next to me on the beaten couch
sits The Frenchman with his Heineken
I wonder if the twenty-something is drunk
watching him take big gulps of his alcohol
then he laughs at the Hulk on the giant screen
yet when we discuss our commander and chief
he seems perfectly sober and ready for the attack
"Maybe not all American's are bad" he says
"You don't like him, either"
I have few thoughts on this subject
For despite my age I am still learning
I still do not fully understand the way the world works
I mainly sit and watch him and the mountain man talk
They laugh
I sit
I sweat
The humidity is getting to me
Even though my watch reads fifteen till twelve
the rain is making the room like a sauna
I watch the Frenchman pick up a stuffed bear and hold it close
like he misses the place he came from
The movie is over now
It's time for me to take my leave
tomorrow will be a busy day
It was a strange encounter running into that boy
No adults were around
It was just us young adults enjoying each others company
Is this what the world could be about?
No worries, just good times
We don't need to hate, we just need to lay back and relax
The light from the glass fridge makes me squint as a round the corner
I give a friendly nod back at the Frenchman and his empty liqour bottle
He smiles and curls up on the old couch, ready to watch another DVD
I depart from the old building and head back across the lawn to my room
the rain is falling on my head
the pepper scent is so strong it's burning my nose
I feel warm, cozy, satisfied, light hearted...
I'll never forget that night at the hostel.
It's dimly lit and heavy with moisture.
It's hot
There is a fan sitting on the floor pointing into the room
It's not doing much good
You can hear the rain pouring outside of the open windows
The smell of green peppers is overpowering the scent of the rain
The night is young in Florida
I wonder how I came to be here of all places
sitting side by side with strangers
and people that I hardly know
How could I still feel so safe and comfortable?
And yet I know that no harm will come to me
The mountain man, young and strong, is sitting in the corner
the saggy beanbag chair he's resting in makes him look short
I know him. He likes to laugh
Next to me on the beaten couch
sits The Frenchman with his Heineken
I wonder if the twenty-something is drunk
watching him take big gulps of his alcohol
then he laughs at the Hulk on the giant screen
yet when we discuss our commander and chief
he seems perfectly sober and ready for the attack
"Maybe not all American's are bad" he says
"You don't like him, either"
I have few thoughts on this subject
For despite my age I am still learning
I still do not fully understand the way the world works
I mainly sit and watch him and the mountain man talk
They laugh
I sit
I sweat
The humidity is getting to me
Even though my watch reads fifteen till twelve
the rain is making the room like a sauna
I watch the Frenchman pick up a stuffed bear and hold it close
like he misses the place he came from
The movie is over now
It's time for me to take my leave
tomorrow will be a busy day
It was a strange encounter running into that boy
No adults were around
It was just us young adults enjoying each others company
Is this what the world could be about?
No worries, just good times
We don't need to hate, we just need to lay back and relax
The light from the glass fridge makes me squint as a round the corner
I give a friendly nod back at the Frenchman and his empty liqour bottle
He smiles and curls up on the old couch, ready to watch another DVD
I depart from the old building and head back across the lawn to my room
the rain is falling on my head
the pepper scent is so strong it's burning my nose
I feel warm, cozy, satisfied, light hearted...
I'll never forget that night at the hostel.
Okay, to start off, I kind of wrote this on the fly. That is, I didn't originally have this written down or anything, I just kind of wrote what came to mind. I know it sounds kind of cheesy... I just didn't really have time or whatever to really make it amazing.
Anyway... I've actually been wanting to write a story... poemy... thingie... about the experience I had at a youth hostel for a long time.
You see, last summer I was taking a boating trip in Florida with my brother's Boy Scout troop. After we flew in we didn't want to pay a lot of money for a hotel so in order to save on cash we took up lodging in a youth hostel somewhere outside of Miami. That night the adults were pretty much like "Do whatever you want" so I went to the "rec room" building that had a living room type room with a giant tv, old couches, and stuff like that. A few other people that were on the trip went with me, but as the night went on they all went to bed until it was just me and the two "characters" in this... prose.
It was a really fun experience, and I loved that trip and this little encounter.
Anyway... I've actually been wanting to write a story... poemy... thingie... about the experience I had at a youth hostel for a long time.
You see, last summer I was taking a boating trip in Florida with my brother's Boy Scout troop. After we flew in we didn't want to pay a lot of money for a hotel so in order to save on cash we took up lodging in a youth hostel somewhere outside of Miami. That night the adults were pretty much like "Do whatever you want" so I went to the "rec room" building that had a living room type room with a giant tv, old couches, and stuff like that. A few other people that were on the trip went with me, but as the night went on they all went to bed until it was just me and the two "characters" in this... prose.
It was a really fun experience, and I loved that trip and this little encounter.
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Props with the liquor
Yeah, I don't think I'll ever forget that French guy either, though you seem to remember more details than I do... It was fun watching the Hulk that night... getting up at 5 the nest morning and fighting for the computers... and we went to bed SO LATE that night, too... It makes me want to go back to Sea Base right now!
Yeah, I don't think I'll ever forget that French guy either, though you seem to remember more details than I do... It was fun watching the Hulk that night... getting up at 5 the nest morning and fighting for the computers... and we went to bed SO LATE that night, too... It makes me want to go back to Sea Base right now!